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Dec. 4th, 2009 10:36 am
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Pretty happy to have gotten some positive feedback on the steampunk novel I wrote for NaNo!  I'm grinning.  Thanks!

The Assembler
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I was doing a NaNoWriMo writing prompt:  Describe a locale in your planned Nano novel.  Here's what I came up with:

The Crystal Cave

You scramble down Gibb's Hill. Only a short way down the hill from the lighthouse you see a small black opening between the rocks. You enter.

You light the electric torch you find the near entrance to see spread out below you:


A huge cavern. A vast open area with crystalline stalactites dripping from the arching roof shivering in your lantern light. There is a  narrow earthen path you scamper onto. It twists downward, narrow and dangerous. You have to grasp the limestone next to you at times to steady yourself.  Finally the path brings you to  the bottom of the cavern then  leads around a wide still pool.  The water is black in the darkness of the cave, except where the stalactites, glowing like diamonds, are reflected in the mirror of the pool.  The air is cool and still. Off in the distance you can hear the sound of pounding surf:  boom... boom.. Almost like a death knell. But then you hear something else. You walk on toward the sound.

The sound becomes more distinct. You swear you hear the thrum of machinery, a whoosh of liquid.  What is it?  The path begins to throb under your feet as you take a curve.  You walk through a narrow opening in the limestone rocks and before you opens out a smaller cave.  It is filled with something... Some sort of machine.  It moves, lights play along it.  It mutters to itself as it works its... magic.  Worktables are arranged along one wall. The gleam of metal and crystal  on the worktables is  reflected, amplified, distorted,  by the power of  some sort of brilliant electric light.  You blink nearly blind in the brilliance.  A shape is bent over a worktable.

As you approach the shape resolves into a man, who turns to regard you. He pushes back a set of goggles that had briefly turned his storm gray eyes into things twenty times their actual size.

He frowns at you. You shiver.
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Chapter 7 is up:
http://majkia.com/The%20Last%20Lantern/last_lantern.htm

Writing has slowed as I cannot put down the Song of Ice and Fire saga. I'm obsessed!
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Chapter 4 - Warrior Priests and Bastards' Eyes is up:

http://majkia.com/The%20Last%20Lantern/last_lantern.htm
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New story I'm working on.

The Last Lantern

A young girl, a mystery, a heretic's priest, and swords.

Let me know what you think, please!

Fan Fic

Jul. 11th, 2009 10:49 am
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I don't write all that much of it, but did write some Highlander fanfic which I'm putting up on my site. Now considerably more of it is there for anyone to read who is interested. It's mostly Methos who a friend writes, and me writing an OC. If you're interested go here:

http://majkia.com/Syd&Methos/immortal_history_lessons.htm
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Since loudtwitter is on the fritz, I'll post a link to the latest story I put up on the website.

It's set in Roger Zelazny's Amberverse. Main characters are my own and Sharon's.

Hope you enjoy it.
http://majkia.com/Amber/amber.htm

Fiction

Jun. 23rd, 2009 02:26 pm
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Through a Lens Darkly chapters 6 and 7 are up
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Something a friend and I began last year and got sidetracked on.  Putting it up in bits.

What happens when a shape-shifter kisses a tombstone.



Chapters 1-5 are up. 

Through a Lens Darkly
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Wedding Bells

The last episode, well, at least for now.  Hope you enjoyed it.
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 Chapter 10 - Back to Normal  is up!

Needless to say, this is a temporary condition....
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My story with Marc Remillard continues:

You'll Feel Right at Home

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